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Plight of the Freedom Fighters by SioUte Plight of the Freedom Fighters by SioUte
PLEASE READ! you'll know what's what! 'Tis important!
Once, three friends journeyed to a great city for a better life. At first arrival, the leader, Jet, almost ruined all chances of that by becoming obsessed with proving two men, Prince Zuko of the Fire Nation and General Iroh of the Fire Nation, to be firebenders, a disastrous thing to be in the city of Ba Sing Se.
After being brainwashed by Dai Li agents for insisting on talking about the war that was kept under lock and key within the city’s walls, Jet met up with the avatar of his time, Aang, the last airbender, along with the avatar’s companions, Katara and Sokka of the Water Tribe and Toph of the Earth Kingdom to try to free the avatar’s animal guide, an air bison, called Appa.
Longshot and Smellerbee, Jet’s two freedom fighters, joined the group as well. During the fight to free the bison, Jet was hurt by an earth spike that the Dai Li leader, Long Feng, earth bended from the ground to punish Jet for being strong enough to break through the brainwashing.
Our story begins with Longshot, the faithful archer, and Smellerbee, the loyal swordswoman, watching over their leader as he fights the injuries inflicted upon him in battle.
Intro by :iconfirephoniex: (tank-choo!!):hug:

MY summary for non-fans: A guy who won't say anything and a girl who won't shut up try to save a guy who can't keep himself out of trouble...who got a hole knocked in him. >_<

So begins a fan-comic!
This will be ongoing, updated 5 pages at a time,
and quite a challenge for my attention span, but I shall see it thru!
It follows the path of Jet, Smellerbee and Longshot after the Lake Laogai catastrophy and onward.
I have no idea how many pages it will no pestering please? ^^'
But I do hope you enjoy it!
And I like the word "plight". Say it with me...plight.

>>>Rated PG for BLOOD!!!<<< :ninjastar::nirvana: (mild at best)

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Derwent pencils on cardstock...words added on "Paint'
>>>You must FULL-VIEW EVERY PAGE or I'll tell Smellerbee YOU KILLED JET!!!!<<<

[ Characters are Jet, Smellerbee and Longshot from "Avatar the Last Airbender" owned by Mike and Bryan]

PST! Before PFF was started, I did a little 4-page warm-up comic where Longshot and Smellerbee have an unpleasent encounter! It got me in the groove of doing comic page layout and drawing our heroes repeatedly...tho Bee looks a little odd. >_<
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HiHereAmI Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love this story :3
LinweElendil Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love it!!! it's awesome :D
Sonica10 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love this story. i read the whole thing.
mylifesadaydream Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
this is the most amazing atla comic i've ever seen. omg i can't get over it
lizzy121314 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow the artwork is just.. amazing :wow: if I could I'd give you 10/10 stars just so amzing
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HollynElizabeth Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011
I just wanted to let you know that I loved this comic! It's so in character, and I totally consider it to be canon. :D Also, Smellerbee's "I COMMAND THE DEAD!" is one of my favorite quotes ever.
FreedomFighter18 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
nich pic
SeanPatrickKelly Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Student General Artist
This...looks interesting, can't wait to read it!!!
ssjSky59 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
I know I'mma be addicted to this once I get a chance to read it all <3
earthchild92 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW! That's all there really is to say. It was really good. I felt connected to it and really enjoyed reading it. :D Thank you for making it and sharing it with the deviant art world :DDD
bunnygrl101 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010
OMG JETTS HAWTNESS!!! AHH *flails* you. are. a. FABULOUS. artist ^_^ amazing story +faves!
golden-acorn Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2010
I haven't read the comic yet, so I'm just commenting on this. Longshot and Smellerbee are PERFECTLY done, but Jet's face anatomy looks a bit off when compared to the original :/

but overall good work
KyaTessa Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
I have read every page of this comic...

and i love it!

you are so good at making comics!
SioUte Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Thankyou for thinking so! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^___^
KyaTessa Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009
You had me on the edge of my seat from the very beginning.

And i have to say Thank you. My favorite character is actually Jet and thanks to your comic, he's alive!

Yay alive-ness!
SioUte Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
YUS! JET LIVES! And I'm very glad you enjoyed it :nod:
KyaTessa Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
... I forgot to say one thing.

Sure Jet's a little...
Ow! Okay! he's totally obsessed with killing the Fire Nation! But he's Sexy!
(gets punched again)
Ow! quit hitting me!
KyaTessa Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009
The story was so good, I couldn't stop reading. The beginning had me totally on the edge of my seat. I was thinking, "What the heck did Longshot say to Smellerbee to freak her out so much?" I was totally captured by the telling of the story.
SioUte Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
That's great to hear! Thanks so much for reading :)
KyaTessa Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
Where did you first get the idea for the story?
vpacheco94 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009
Sweet. You should check out my drawings.
KiteoftheAzureFlame Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2008
Omfg, your storyline!
It's the same idea I was thinking!
yay, I know someone who actually DID this storyline!
Shahrezad1 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
This comic is awesome beyond all description! I loved every minute of it, and you really developed their characters several steps further than was shown in the show. Great job, I really enjoyed this one. And you've made me a permanent Smellershot fan. =D
SioUte Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
Yesh! the more Smellershot minions the better! Thanks for reading! :bow:
Shahrezad1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
I've actually already drawn some smellershot fanart. ^__^;; You really have turned me into a minion... *laughs*
spitfire-productions Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2008  Professional General Artist
So awesome! My irken characters are freedom fighters to.
FireLadyLarania Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2008
danm i cant read it now, its way late
I love this can't wait for PFF2. :)
Mairelyn Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
someone recomended me this story.

so hope you don't mind the fav

Can't wait to start reading it!
SioUte Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2007
Hope u enjoy it! :D
alciha Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
Excellent, excellent.
swan-swan Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2007
Daxtah Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
OMG, cool! I saw your sig once in ASN and I wondered, what could this be? Now, that I got linked to here, TIME TO READ AND FAVE! I'm excited to read all 60 pages, thank you! :w00t:
SioUte Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
Cool! Thanks for taking the time!
BlueFlutterby Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2007
so fantastic!!! I went seriously fangirl and considered faving all 60 pages it was so good! I'd love to see more!
Tabbi-Cat Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007
This is the most awesome comic I have read in a while ^_^
invader-hime Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2007
Woo hoo!
A cool cover for an awesome Doujin! ^_^
SioUte Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2007
why thankya^^
Borasak-Chunsa Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2007
Graghusdflre!!! <3<3<3

I LOVED this! The entire story!
I kept laughing and swooning and just fangirling in general all the way through.
SioUte Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2007
Thanks^^ my pleasure!
SokkasBaby Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
OMG you are amazing at drawing!!!!! and now you have made me a smellershot fan, i never was until this!!!!! teehee?
SioUte Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
:evillaugh: YESH! haha...and thanks^^
SokkasBaby Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
no problem! haha!
sarcasmdog Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007   Writer
-has decided that just faving this will be much easier than faving every. single. page. XDDD-
SioUte Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
that's cool^^
Yurbleyurble13 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2007
Wow this SERIOUSLY looks intresting!!!
i'll start reading right now!!! 8DDD
Vetorswest Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2007
Eee, awesome comic. ooo: :heart:
windbender Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
All I can say is...sqeeeeeee! Will there be anymore?
SioUte Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
much more...even if it kills me X_x I'm glad u like it!
Terrali Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
this is awesome^_^
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